Tim Nikias wrote:
> 
> How about this:
> He began writing the note, trashed it, added a sentence,
> trashed it again, added the last note, threw pen away,
> took pills while sobbing (thus the the few remaining pills,
> he dropped them), put the glass on the note, so that it won't
> fly away.
> I wasn't too comfortable with the idea that he just writes his
> note and leaves, so I made the paper wrinkled, as if he
> was pondering about this a long time, even though some lines
> were already written.
> Perhaps if I'd made the first line a little more gray, rather
> than black, it would appear to be older, bleached out,
> and then everything would fit?
> 
> Simply put, I didn't want this image to be purely realistic,
> but also a little desolate, untidy. The person is just lost
> in chaos.
> Its meant to be a little more expressionistic rather than 100%
> realistic.
> 


I didn't understand this from what I saw. Sorry, my fault.
Still, I'm not sure that it adds anything to the image, but
that's just my blurred view.

Perhaps I hadn't mentioned it, but I do like the image.

Cheers,

Remco

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